In The Village Of Hidden Details Poem by Ernest Makuakua

In The Village Of Hidden Details

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In the village of hidden details

in the village all of the guys including me as the story goes were sent out to the fields to find food to find, education, jobs and achieve their dreams

None did.

In our village the boys were boys and girls were girls playing skiping and soccer,
in the village writers told stories that daddy told them that mothers told them. In the village some inteligent stories were told by adolecent staged kids

in the village dreams were crushed and hidden details were known. In the village guys were disappearing from manhood and left eyes surprised. In the village girls left homes due to parents devorces due to hidden details due to well other things which wont be told...


In the village boys turned to thieves since goals were shut for too long and the world exhaled

in the village grand fathers made kids and died and fathers stayed in their inherited lands and died and daughters left homes and died and nobody seemed to notice when they gave birth till some independent fool arived and he died then
they had to change their ways yet it was late for positivity, negativity had taken over...

In the village churches were no longer churches but business properties and the priests made money and danced and bishops made money and danced and the followers saw and left... yet unaware the hidden details

in the village mothers were girls and fathers were boys for they seated where their children should.

In the village the world got too dark for these hidden details as the 1 in the world destroys due to our ignoreoce

and...
at the end...
you are the perfect advisor to your life and Lord will lead you

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