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Black Soul

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black soul
sometimes it feels heavy
sometimes hard to go on
sometimes giving up feels like an option
TRAPPED IN A BLACK SOUL

Dear so far yet so near the end
black soul

competitive as it is trying by all means to drop you when you rise up
cooperative at times
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Saturday, December 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
we so find ourselves trapped sometimes that we forget that we have only one life that was borrowed to us to make change to our challenges. we always have a choice for after each rain theres surely a rainbow at the end if not a cool breeze.
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COMMENTS
Diane Montemayor 18 February 2017
Dear Sir Ernest, Wow, great poem. Very emotional and powerful poem sir..... Discrimination in nationality, race and ethnicity can not be controlled, because it is actually a nature of human being...What matters most is the goodness of heart and soul that only God can see it.......Thanks for sharing this poem sir.. Sincerely, diane
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Ernest Makuakua 03 June 2016
Glad you did Sister. thanks
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Sindiswa Ndamane 03 June 2016
beautifully written, i enjoyed it...
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Ernest Makuakua 05 May 2016
thank you for your comments good people NGC JIYA
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Howard Savage 19 January 2016
Great poem with true sentiments and spirit. don't give up for I am a black soul as well. Remember man was made out of the dust of the ground. The best soil is black soil. Rich soil. Keep writing You are headed to the top.
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 January 2016
Competitive! But, we are all human beings on earth. Thanks for sharing.
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Jasbir Chatterjee 14 January 2016
A soul can't be black; it is the core of a human being and it is where God resides. It is the negative thoughts that are black; these are what you should fight and banish from your life.
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 January 2016
we work yet our efforts goes to waste, wash the pain yet stains remain we talk yet our words are ignored im sure we are seen yet too dark to be saved these lines are a killer bro...well written poem indeed. I'm sorry I took long to read and comment on it.
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Bharati Nayak 04 January 2016
We sometimes come under the trap of negative feelings like doubts, and frustrations when life looks heavy and burdensome.We loose faith in ourselves.Our soul becomes black soul loosing all jest for life.We should not let ourselves come under this trap.We have only one birth and so live it joyfully.
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Hans Vr 04 January 2016
Deep inside there is this wonderful spark. When we take the time to see a beautiful flower, a wonderful sunrise, that spark tends to become a small flame. If we allow the cool breeze of love blow a bit of oxygen in the small flame it may become a fire, that gives wonderful warmth and light to our soul. Another nice poem filled with deep thoughts and poetically expressed.
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