In Time's Control We Are Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

In Time's Control We Are

Rating: 5.0


People do not like sorrows
Always they like happiness
But they get sadness is true
Every individual is responsible

Life is pulled by Time's thread
Nobody can escape from this
Only we remain in confusion
But this is definite to feel.

We all are in Time's control
Nobody likes to be old in age
But aging comes on time's role
This is wonderful sure here.

All like to live, nobody likes
But death comes and takes in lap
We feel this but do not escape
Because life's thread is in time.

In time's control we are we know
In between birth and death we swim
Only in search of matters we remain
Now we have to watch time carefully.

Sunday, November 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 01 November 2015

Ageing gracefully is a nice and rewarding process. There is no escape from either death or old age to every born human. Accepting these facts willingly and molding ourselves accordingly make matters easy and enjoyable. When it is certain, why not enjoy it? Nice thought presented in the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Dogma Daniman 15 October 2020

I read this poem times again. So sweet I feel reading this poem dear poet sir.

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Dogma Daniman 05 March 2019

Time has deep impact on us. Time controls us directly. This poem is truly an interesting poem.

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Pushpendra Patel 19 February 2019

Time controls us and we are hand of time. We should live carefully. Lovely message is transferred.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 March 2016

Nobody likes to be old in age! Nice piece of work

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2015

We all are in Time's control Nobody likes to be old in age That's a reality, a very thoughtful poem......................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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