Jahan zaib

Rookie - 123 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Incomplete - Poem by Jahan zaib

Taking along your memories
Came I once more to lake old
Wet were eyes with tears warm
Still on lips was smile bold
Reflected you the waves on bank
Few years back it took my mind
Came I in shade of tree, old
Many stories of the past it told
Wrote your name on the hot sand
As witness the old tree does there stand

Tearful I lost in old days
Held my palm to eyes, wet
Searched you, in lines of my palm
There in lines of innocent palm mine
A lines runs but ends incomplete
That's you, I guess, short as summer night
For quite some time my eyes with it fight
Nothing has changed around the lake
The wind blows from the same side
Waves in summer make the mighty tide
Honey bees come to flowers around
Everything in nature is perfectly complete
But love mine. It's me only me
That is without you
Broken and so incomplete

Jahan Zaib 20/01/2013


Comments about Incomplete by Jahan zaib

  • Sallam Yassin (1/22/2013 11:30:00 AM)


    incomplete is sweet and sad
    sweet one is to be in love
    but sad one- the whole world is complete
    when you are alone with memories of love/ great work of art Jahan as always
    God bless you
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  • Valsa George (1/22/2013 1:41:00 AM)


    Never get lost in old memories! Make your present a happy one! New blooms will definitely appear as it is still spring for you! ! An emotion charged write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (1/21/2013 8:58:00 AM)


    Glad you share your English version of Tere Bin Ham Adhoore Hein with others, cheers! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (1/20/2013 8:00:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem, very romantic and nostalgic. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 20, 2013



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