My Helen Poem by Jahan Zeb

My Helen

Rating: 5.0

In a garden green we sat
My hand in yours
Yours held I
Roses around
Stars in the sky
Moon in full bloom
And the gentle breeze
Hither and thither
Move the blades of grass
The fire-flies flew
Around me and you
In restless heart of mine
The passion slowly grew
Closer I got
Pressed hand tight
No more in the world
Nor the nature's sight
The numberless glowworms
Around you revolved
In beauty and the charm
Resting on my arm
A newly wedded groom
Envious the moon
Jealousy in stars,
For resting on my arm
Was Helen of the Troy

This poem is dedicated to Saeed Jan
Valerie Dohren 09 November 2012

Beautifully written, inspired poem.

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Stevie Taite 10 November 2012

An utterly beautiful Write! I love that you made stars and moon envious of you love and happiness. You produce perfect magical imagery with your words!

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Xelam Kan™ 10 November 2012

wow mind blowing as the only word i could phrase for this sweetly rhyme with poignant end note.....

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Elena Sandu 11 November 2012

In beauty and love we could get rid of space time and death. Brilliant, loved it! Thank you for share.

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Unwritten Soul 11 November 2012

Awww the poem made of sweetest nectar for sweet fellow...Hmm i think Saaed Jan smile like a bright sun reading the best fragrance poem from you..such a nice time here_SOul

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2018

Beautiful romantic poem, a touching one.

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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2015

A lovely romantic poem, well articulated and subtly penned to capture the bliss of love mutually felt between a happy and loving couple. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sahil Sood 17 November 2012

a very beautiful poem sir, luvd the way you xpressd emotions..

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Nabila ima 16 November 2012

Nice poem and you can express what you feel. I like it

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So Close 15 November 2012

yeah its good and fully packed with emotions good work... »so close«

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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