My Helen Poem by Jahan Zeb

My Helen

Rating: 5.0


In a garden green we sat
My hand in yours
Yours held I
Roses around
Stars in the sky
Moon in full bloom
And the gentle breeze
Hither and thither
Move the blades of grass
The fire-flies flew
Around me and you
In restless heart of mine
The passion slowly grew
Closer I got
Pressed hand tight
No more in the world
Nor the nature's sight
The numberless glowworms
Around you revolved
In beauty and the charm
Resting on my arm
A newly wedded groom
Envious the moon
Jealousy in stars,
For resting on my arm
Was Helen of the Troy

Friday, November 9, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: jealousy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is dedicated to Saeed Jan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 15 November 2012

A very beautiful and fantastic poem. A great tribute.

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Hazel Durham 13 November 2012

Beautiful, so delicately written with lovely imagery. Inspired write! Thanks for sharing.

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The irony is the powerful co existence of a poetic mind that is never devoid of elusive romantic flutters. The notes on the dark and shady spaces have finally been replaced by this brilliant write one on a breathing sign.

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Vijay Sai R 12 November 2012

a fascinating piece of poetry

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Anita Sehgal 11 November 2012

very romantic.poem..! .

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2018

Beautiful romantic poem, a touching one.

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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2015

A lovely romantic poem, well articulated and subtly penned to capture the bliss of love mutually felt between a happy and loving couple. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sahil Sood 17 November 2012

a very beautiful poem sir, luvd the way you xpressd emotions..

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Nabila ima 16 November 2012

Nice poem and you can express what you feel. I like it

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So Close 15 November 2012

yeah its good and fully packed with emotions good work... »so close«

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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