Captain Cur

Rookie - 423 Points (England)

Inertia Is The Greatest Sin - Poem by Captain Cur

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No mountain is forever built.
Flowers bloom then they wilt,
nature's forces wear them down,
forever lost and never found.

Moonless nights where light is dead,
phantom coldness shears my head;
jagged rock and icy steel
camouflage the things I feel.

When my eyes turn to the sea,
waves of passion thrive in me.
Caution I dropp to a whirl of wind,
freely falls in the ocean's spin.

Voyages I fail to take
each day harder are they to make.
A heart must act or never win.
Inertia is the greatest sin!


Comments about Inertia Is The Greatest Sin by Captain Cur

  • Patricia Grantham (2/4/2013 8:57:00 AM)


    I love this poem, you have to do something to make life work Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Shahzia Batool (1/28/2013 3:17:00 AM)


    From the introductory idea till the culmination in the end, your composition is measured by all line & length...good poetry with a result in our hand:

    A heart must act or never win.
    Inertia is the greatest sin!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 27, 2013



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