' Infinite Depths Of Heaven Poem by Linda Ori

' Infinite Depths Of Heaven

Rating: 2.9


From infinite depths of heaven,
warrior clouds
ignite the universe
to flame.....................
Descending
upon the unsuspecting
Tranquility
of a sleeping earth.................
about to be
awakened by

a kiss.


6/07/2009
*written as a response to 'Gently Upon The Still'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 12 June 2009

A superb canvass of spiritual grandeur culminating in a pair of lips. From the sublime to the sublimely personal. Beautiful indeed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Indira Renganathan 11 June 2009

Superb imagination....a good flow of words...nectar pouring10+++

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 June 2009

wow ma'am...this amazing and i really felt these lines...hey it is bit like a phrase from a thriller...this is something different from what i v read from yours.... shows you are versatile writer ma'am...10++ with lots of love shan

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Perchance to dream a nightmare than be freed from its spell by a gentle kiss.The moods that colour our days.A ten from me, mostly because of its imagery and depth.

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Patrick McFarland 07 June 2009

Nice imagery Linda.10+

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Ken E Hall 14 October 2009

Lovely poem of showers heaven sent and ending just how I would love to wake up, how could we do without this wonder first but not last visit uavaniceday regards

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Nikunj Sharma 24 August 2009

Sweet and serene and comforting as monsoon showers on heated earth...gud one

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John Lyday 21 June 2009

Ha ha, that surprised me. I was expecting something bad to happen and then we got kissed. Very clever. Good poetry.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

Excellent, lovely, short, cute 10+++

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this is a perfect example of allowing th eemotions to shape the form...

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