From infinite depths of heaven,
warrior clouds
ignite the universe
to flame.....................
Descending
upon the unsuspecting
Tranquility
of a sleeping earth.................
about to be
awakened by
a kiss.
6/07/2009
*written as a response to 'Gently Upon The Still'.
Superb imagination....a good flow of words...nectar pouring10+++
wow ma'am...this amazing and i really felt these lines...hey it is bit like a phrase from a thriller...this is something different from what i v read from yours.... shows you are versatile writer ma'am...10++ with lots of love shan
Perchance to dream a nightmare than be freed from its spell by a gentle kiss.The moods that colour our days.A ten from me, mostly because of its imagery and depth.
Lovely poem of showers heaven sent and ending just how I would love to wake up, how could we do without this wonder first but not last visit uavaniceday regards
Sweet and serene and comforting as monsoon showers on heated earth...gud one
Ha ha, that surprised me. I was expecting something bad to happen and then we got kissed. Very clever. Good poetry.
this is a perfect example of allowing th eemotions to shape the form...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A superb canvass of spiritual grandeur culminating in a pair of lips. From the sublime to the sublimely personal. Beautiful indeed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥