David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Ink - Poem by David Darbyshire

They'er not very clever
when they need a pencil
and an eraser,
cause they can't think
when writing with ink

So type away
write your poems all day
there is lots of space
and there is always the 'Backspace'


Comments about Ink by David Darbyshire

  • (4/27/2006 8:45:00 AM)


    Cute, David! I write with ink and the thing is, I like seeing all the changes - scratched out words/restored words, etc. It's really good looking back at the first rough draft and however many others, if any, between that and the final version. Of course, after posting, I still find the need to edit! ... Thanks for the funny today! (Report) Reply

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  • (4/27/2006 6:24:00 AM)


    Thank goodness for white out! Clever Dave!

    Patricia
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  • (4/27/2006 6:16:00 AM)


    I use a pen - you just scratch everything out you don't like, and whatever's left, is what you've got. Sweet poem, David! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 27, 2006



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