Innocent Rose! - Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Hark! thou art in this momment,
Dancin' in love and merriment,
On the bosom of a lone land,
When my life in such a futile sand,
Trying slowly to commence
All its worries to condense
Oh! wilt thou bloom in my garden;
To bring that glorious spring
Unto my life this time, 's if Eden.
Beloved! singest thou a love-song
To ease all my woelful burden.
Lo! roses bloom on our bosom,
But we're loved by only some
And then in dreams we breathe in
Until they erode all our corlas in vain.
Oh! 'tis a new dawn; so be close!
As thou art an 'innocent rose'
Let thy love solace all my woes! ! ! !

Comments about Innocent Rose! by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

  • Heather Wilkins (8/27/2013 10:43:00 AM)

    beautiful poem about the innocent rose. so lovely will she bloom in your garden (Report) Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/29/2012 5:34:00 PM)

    This is where in poetry fantasy blows the mind away..Superb write and cornerstone (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2011 1:44:00 AM)

    The icon of love the rose so eloquently used in this poem and the reader is enchanted
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  • Jacqui Broad (12/23/2011 5:57:00 AM)

    Upon reading this again, it's as if you're asking your loved one to please treat you gently. You've had your heart broken many times, but with her it's a new dawn, and she's like an innocent rose, blooming for the first time. She's the only one you need in your garden, the flower you'd tenderly care for. Truly a beautiful poem, Vipins. (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2011 10:07:00 AM)

    nice nice nice poem ienjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • Tiffany M... (12/17/2011 7:10:00 AM)

    This is an absolutely exquisite poem... I love how you used much language that not many do anymore, and the metaphors grabbed my attention. This is amazing! (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2011 10:06:00 AM)

    That was a very great wonderful poem i lvoed it wiht all my heart (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (12/15/2011 6:24:00 PM)

    beautifully written love poem.
    very well done, Vipins.
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  • (12/14/2011 1:34:00 PM)

    Very good poem brilliantly written. You have a lot of talent (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2011 12:52:00 PM)

    Luv ur uze of metaphors briliant luv poems. (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2011 8:59:00 AM)

    dear friend,
    your poem innocent rose is a fine work. nice poem.
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  • Malaya Roses (12/11/2011 5:51:00 AM)

    Love is the human's reflection over care and possessiveness towards something or someone but sometimes... its hurts and bleed us dry...
    But the poet is really know how to make us think about flower and forgotten about the thorns.
    Excellent! ! !
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  • Jacob Ribald (12/10/2011 8:16:00 AM)

    This poem is amazing, I shall definitely continue to read your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 11:11:00 PM)

    For me now thou art an 'innocent rose'.... lovely and beautiful lines....10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2011 11:03:00 PM)

    gr8.. u play gr8 with words.. (Report) Reply

  • Cg Shankar (12/9/2011 7:49:00 AM)

    Tis a new dawn; so be close!
    For me now thou art an 'innocent rose'.' Brilliant closing lines.Rose is an ambassador of love that blooms according to modus operany! Nice poem dear vipins.
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  • (12/8/2011 8:58:00 AM)

    A really beautiful poem, a fantastic write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2011 3:59:00 AM)

    This 'innocent rose' will surely bring all the good things you've wished for..A beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (12/8/2011 12:45:00 AM)

    hh God! ! ! ! ! you are really a talented writer, once again you proved it! ! ! ! ! !
    (enikku kurachokke manasilayi, enthoru tough language) sanu chechi is correct! ! ! ! !
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  • (12/7/2011 8:59:00 AM)

    Yeah! Very sweet poem indeed, thou art a great writter, nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 29, 2012

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