Innocently In Love Poem by Brie Carter

Innocently In Love

Rating: 4.8


We sit on your bed
And watch some TV
When I look at you
And you look at me.

You smile and I giggle
Then you tackle me down
When you kiss me softly
And my head spins around

We sit back up
You kiss my cheek
You lay your head on my shoulder
And my body feels weak

You kiss my neck softly
And I secretly smile
You make your way up to my mouth
And we kiss for a while

My nervousness is gone
Disappeared somewhere up above
I think that I might be
Innocently in love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jack Price 23 May 2009

There is so many memories with your poetry and I mean it in a complimentary way. Great poem and I remember too myself (smiles) J. L.

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Twilight Whispers 19 May 2009

You're writing is beautiful and innocent, I really love it. It reminds me of the things I used to write about, and how I'd write about them when I was your age. Keep writing, really. You've got great potential :) x

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