Insignificant Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Insignificant

Rating: 5.0

I felt like a spume,
tossed back and forth by the waves
and laced the seashore.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Sunday, February 25, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: rights,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2024

TWO: The great poetess compares herself to foam, which refers to sea foam or foam created by waves crashing against the shore. These images suggest a sense of transience and insignificance.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2024

EIGHT: I truly enjoyed this beautiful poem, I have constantly longwinded responses, but at least I have worded what I meant. Truly TOP Marks for this Beauty

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2024

SEVEN: This excellent poem invites reflection on our place in the grand scheme of things, highlighting the beauty and fragility of life. The poem encourages us to find meaning even in the midst of fleeting moments and uncertain tides

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2024

SIX: The mention of being "connected" to the shore indicates a desire for connection or purpose. Even though the poet feels unimportant, she searches for meaning in her short-lived existence.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2024

FIVE: The delicate nature of sea foam reflects human vulnerability. Just as the foam dissolves in the sea, our lives are fragile and subject to change.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 April 2024

Top stars and to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 April 2024

Beautiful words with brilliant metphors makes this poem truly classic......Thank you Rose!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 April 2024

Tossed by the waves like a spume - helpless and so insignificant - that is how we are - a miniscule in this vast universe.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 20 March 2024

Liked your seashore metaphor, Rose Marie. The mind. Tfs

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Nabakishore Dash 26 February 2024

A spume may be insignificant, but your writings and mentality is very significant for many like me.My deeply felt regards for your style of writing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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