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Intimacy Avoidance Syndrome

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You had grown out of your marriage,
You said,
That’s why you loved me may be,
I guess,
But you grew out of your love even,
What a pity!
You would grow out of yourself too,
Some day,
You wouldn’t have a place to hide that day,
Your last day,

You may better go and take rest for good,
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This is striking stuff. Many of us have been on the end of this syndrome - love the expression, all your own - and you write well, in quasi-observational/objective manner, of the effect of it. Yes - grand. t x

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Poignant, & lectural penning, indeed...You can almost taste the roe & bitterness expressed, here...Vivid tale-tell...Pristine structure...Crisp, & mellifluous.... Solid Craftsmanship, Amit. ~ F.j.c.R.~

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