! ! ! Into The Memoirs Of Night! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! Into The Memoirs Of Night! ! !

Rating: 3.1


Oh it is dazzling here again in lone night
I come away in heartbeats to see sky tearing blue
as if total void snaps in its rune by the blue voices
passion ingenious flows onto the yonder pond
like rain water into the memoirs of the night

the moist darkness over the green leaves
the rain drops sleeks away from the leaf tips
yet it bestirs the clenching hand to bow down
the green meadow smooches with raining shadow

I still remember the childhood days
hanging over swings of the memoirs
blazing the glory of rain by the songs from core
the gleams of love overshadows the moon
hiding all the clouds from the plumes of desire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gone with the wind 30 July 2008

Loved it...you are a true true and truest poet...loved the way you described everything..it was really very beautiful and soothing.. Love Gul

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Wilfred Mellers 10 August 2008

I have read several of your poems. They are well written and deep with imagery. Writing to me is like a song fill with overtone imagery subtle with complexity of harmonies wrapped in a catchy tune. Words and there construction are like music to my ears. When I write it follows a melody in my head and flows like a waterfall through my laptop. Where it comes from I don't know.

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Gert Strydom 12 June 2009

The picture that you poem is painting is vivid and true.

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Sarah Sisson 06 December 2008

I simply LOVE this one! ! ! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 November 2008

Another strong fine piece.....weightful composition! .....10+

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 12 November 2008

DEEP ROOTED EMOTIONS... BFUL WORDS... :)

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Jan Oskar Hansen 30 October 2008

this poem is overflowing with emotion, very well written indeed.

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Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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