Intoxication Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Intoxication

Rating: 5.0


O love do not intoxicate me
To fall from the life
And live in isolation
I have enough responsibility
To fulfill and my heart
Can accommodate enough pains
Than you can give to test my patience and perseverance.

Tuesday, January 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

Ya besides love there are many things to do....Great write again, I will add this to my favourite.

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 January 2016

Love is indeed an intoxication, it seeps into our life and creates a havoc leaving us dazed and helpless. Beautiful poem. Perfect 10+++ for this realization. Aur bhi gham hai zamaane main mohobbat ke siva.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2016

Right. love is a kind of intoxication. It either takes us away from life or brings us nearer to it. Well penned my friend.

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Kelly Kurt 27 January 2016

The sudden appearance of love can overwhelm an already complicated life. Nicely envisioned and written

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