M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,358 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Intoxication - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

O love do not intoxicate me
To fall from the life
And live in isolation
I have enough responsibility
To fulfill and my heart
Can accommodate enough pains
Than you can give to test my patience and perseverance.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Intoxication by M. Asim Nehal

  • (2/2/2016 9:33:00 AM)

    Ya besides love there are many things to do....Great write again, I will add this to my favourite. (Report) Reply

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  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/28/2016 1:06:00 AM)

    Love is indeed an intoxication, it seeps into our life and creates a havoc leaving us dazed and helpless. Beautiful poem. Perfect 10+++ for this realization. Aur bhi gham hai zamaane main mohobbat ke siva. (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (1/27/2016 3:59:00 AM)

    Right. love is a kind of intoxication. It either takes us away from life or brings us nearer to it. Well penned my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/27/2016 3:17:00 AM)

    The sudden appearance of love can overwhelm an already complicated life.
    Nicely envisioned and written
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 27, 2016

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