Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 354,621 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

Intriguing - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

A story from outside,
Intriguing!
With the problems of life;
But, try to defend the truth and live in peace.

Sweet pain!
With pleasure and pain in love;
Like sticks and stones fighting each other.

Handsome,
Affection;
A rite of passage,
Attractive.

Beauty,
To the place of love;
Beautiful!
With the acts of your works;
Sending out a story to the people.

Topic(s) of this poem: pain


Comments about Intriguing by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Savita Tyagi (11/18/2015 11:21:00 AM)


    This is a beautiful poem. It delivers the message of peace and love with out imposing it. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. Thank you so much for your recent comment on my poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/13/2015 1:28:00 AM)


    Wonderful line to end this beautiful poem..............Beauty,
    To the place of love;
    Beautiful!
    With the acts of your works;
    Sending out a story to the people.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 5:05:00 AM)


    A story from outside,
    Intriguing!
    With the problems of life; Amazingly and very finely presented this wise work. Nice.10
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  • (11/5/2015 10:41:00 AM)


    This poem sends out messages like little spurts from a fountain. Little lines contain complete thoughts: Try to defend the truth and live in peace. This is no easy feat. Or, when love delivers both pain and pleasure - fighting each other with sticks and stones. Good analogy. This poem does not easily surrender its meaning, but it was well worth the effort thinking about it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 5, 2015



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