Invisible Beauty Poem by Soran M. H

Don't you dare remove this very intelligent and instructive poem. Grrrr! The first four lines are very poetic..... I like the insertion of a one line stanza..... the last four lines is a call for creativity that creates a desire within the reader to do just that. If you want to fiddle with it, go ahead but leave this poem up and rename your 2nd poem. Please! ! ! 10

And your note clarifies all doubts. I write what I feel and sometimes surreal and philosophical. Again I say well written 10+

A brave call, believe me I have written so many poems on social injustice, human sufferings, liberation etc but you don't find readers for it since we all come across such things in our daily life and we all being humans we feel their pains, sorrows, sufferings etc and we want to forget it as quickly as possible hence we look for some alternate which will please or ease our tensions. Your poem is very good.

This is an exhortation to all poets to depart from cliches and hackneyed expressions! A longing for the past also is there in most of the poems. I know it is there in my poems! Instead of finding beauty in the moon and stars, learn to find beauty on a wrinkled face. Instead of retiring to the past, learn to live in the present and accept its challenges. In my opinion, this is a beautiful and meaningful poem, Soran!

Liberate your pen from nostalgia- - - - - -> now that is a well-turned well-expessed well-done line! ! ! ! Succinct, lovely word choice, and a call to action at the same time! ! !

Thank you, Rose, for this rich and profound critical reading. This is precisely what the text aims for; it is the duty of a poetic text—to constantly renew its visions, themes, imagery, and techniques. We must avoid repeating ourselves or others within our texts.

The wonderful Poet demands an evolution in Poetry., pushing it past the surface -level imagery that has dominated literature for centuries.

A compelling insight that serves as a.direct call to action, challenging Poets to abandon the comfort of the visible world and traditional nostalgia in pursuit of something far more enduring.

A powerful and straightforward poem. A beautiful reminder that the most profound subjects for art are not always the ones we can see, but the ones we must feel and unearth

A beautiful and straightforward write that conveys kindness and love woven by one who has a compassionate heart. Top marks! ! ! ¿