The Goodness In The Universe Poem by Soran M. H

The Goodness In The Universe

Rating: 5.0

The Goodness in the Universe

when the sun departed
you slept
but the rain didn't
At dawn
you woke up
with the various birds' songs
and the flourish of
bright and colourful petals
then you knew
there is no place for sadness
in nature's carnival
there ….
a pure beauty
and true loyalty
still exists

The Goodness In The Universe
Friday, August 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: human condition
Aarzoo Mehek 18 August 2020

Nature has the power to heal and nurture. A beautiful positive poem. Loved reading it.10+

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Susan Williams 18 August 2020

Thank you for creating a sense of wellness with this poem. I felt the stress and tension drain away with every word and line. This needs to be Poem of the Day in these Covid times. My friend, this poem is a taste of heaven for the weary. 10++++++ and onto my fav list

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Valsa George 18 August 2020

I remember to have commented on this poem! Unfortunately it is not showing up! It is disappointing! Let me comment once more.....! There is so much of beauty in Nature. Much of it is hidden in deep pockets. If one opens his eyes and looks around, he can see it. Nature hardly disappoints. Some great poets like Wordsworth derived a lot of inspiration from Nature. When Nature celebrates her carnival of colours, there is room for mirth alone and no place for any sorrow. A lovely lyrical write!

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

Dear Aarzoo Mehek Your fruitful passage on my poem is the biggest gift I have received ever. I hope you were satisfied and enjoyed reading it, many thanks again

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Tom Allport 08 July 2022

An inspirational write to look forward to another sun rise.

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Soran M. H 08 July 2022

Thanks Tom for this amazing way of reading and such a fantastic comment, well done

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

Soran's poetry always showers wisdom and insight.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

A magnificent poem well presented. Very inspiring and powerful.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

The unceasing love, generosity and beauty of Mother Nature always alleviate humanity's harshness and cruelties.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 October 2021

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant....captivating expression! I have read some of your poems. You seem to be an inborn talent. I love your poetry dear poet.

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