Invisible Love Poem by Nahar piya

Invisible Love

Rating: 5.0


He is watching the sun every day,
I also see.
He's under the sky,
I am also
Only two are looking different.
He is awake at night, I too
I thought I could not sleep, thinking that someone might be slumbering.
That one bird is flying.
Maybe he will be in his area.
Fly over my head, go over his head.
Maybe I will not touch him or he will not.
But there will be some communication,
Some invisible shades and unknown emotions
That's my love for him.

Invisible Love
Sunday, February 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
unknown feelings.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 March 2018

Maybe I will not touch him or he will not. But there will be some communication, Some invisible shades and unknown emotions That's my love for him. It's like the modern and delicate form of the Meghadootam by KaliDas, the great Sanskrit Poet. You have a sensible and soft heart Nahar, and a beautiful art of writing. Carry on dear. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++

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Chinedu Dike 27 February 2018

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, lovely and very passionate. A nice creation Nahar. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2018

A lovely poem! I appreciate your lucid expression! My favorite lines: Maybe I will not touch him or he will not. But there will be some communication/Some invisible shades and unknown emotions/That's my love for him....Adorable style of penning...10

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dhaka, Bangladesh
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