Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Is An Old Age Curse?

Rating: 4.9
I sat motionless after visit to an old home,
Sultry place and no visits and stay lone,
With all the agony of pains remain alone,
Reminds us of journey for self and only one,

Their woes and tales tore me apart,
Life was not smooth but in part,
People travels in jet but some still in cart,
Project self as noble and try looking smart,
Life seemed to me so hollow,
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 10 October 2009
So near (in blood) , so far (in keeping) . My parental duty is sacrificed at the altar of my personal comforts. You’ve exposed the travails of those hapless souls left in old age homes. The nuclear family concept has proved to be a nuclear bomb on the unique joint family. A poignant, touching, and a thought-provoking composition. # 10.
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Ashley Paul 19 September 2009
I sat motionless after visit to an old home, Sultry place and no visits and stay lone, With all the agony of pains remain alone, Reminds us of journey for self and only one,
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Pami Panchal 18 August 2009
it was never a curse this before....10
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Lalvani Rekha 18 August 2009
no definitely not....10
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Sulochna Pandit 13 August 2009
it is normal course.....10
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Raju Rajput 13 August 2009
no it is never....10
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Jigisha Vyas 13 August 2009
why curse it is normal thing.....10
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Maulin Shah 11 August 2009
it should not be consdiered so....10
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Kunwar Patel 10 August 2009
swe should take it lightly....10
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Radha Seth 10 August 2009
it can never be a curse...10
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