Is God Partial? Poem by Hezekiah Tiamiyu

Is God Partial?

Rating: 4.8


God, Supreme Being known to all.
His existence years before man's invention.
The church says He is a Lord of perfection.
When you walk through darkness and Him you call,
Faster than a gunshot, He hears your calls.
Fierce as a lion, God is feared by all nations,
For His speech alone can cause destruction.
Why art Thou give not to man power for all?


Why art Thou took a rib from man,
And made her, woman more beautiful?
Why art Thou give some wealth and power not to farm,
And many poor, and for the rich they work so dutiful?
Human being and spirit being have not equal ear.
When answers will come, I still will be here.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Is God Partial? Is an Italian sonnet which i wrote based on inquisitiveness..... Everyone wants to know why some things are not just there...Right?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roong S 13 July 2012

I like this one! Toheeb, there are reasons for everything..you'll know one day.

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This is good work...A stellar display of contemporary free-verse...Powerful storyline, and you deliver it well...~FjR~

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Neela Nath Das 23 June 2012

yes.When we suffer we feel like this.I liked it.Toheeb.Keep writing.

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 23 June 2012

Hm-m! The inquisitiveness lurks in every mind; and yet you've done a great job in justifying the issue. Great job! Poignant write!

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Juan Guzman 19 June 2012

The poem is very good, but lacks in the use of proper english. Yet you can clearly read what you want to say and it gives of your emotions spendidly, good job.

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Hezekiah Tiamiyu

Hezekiah Tiamiyu

Lagos state, Nigeria
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