Is crying really that immature?
It's the bodies own self-cure
A way to rid out all the pain
The only way to keep one self sane
Is cutting really that wrong?
It's the sound of the caged bird's song
A release to the emotions that tear us apart
The fixing of all broken hearts
Is suicide really that bad?
For most it takes away all that is sad
Freeing their soul and clearing their mind
Leaving all of their misfortune behind
Does this really sound that absurd?
It's about time that society heard
What we do puts our mind at ease
Let us live our lives won't you please?
this poem is very ironic.the way you portay the the uplift of ones suicidal thoughts and actions it really does make the reader wonder is suicide really that bad.
you write really well miss lady, i really hope u r jus venting cos freak we need poets tht can stil write POETRY! ! ! so please dnt check out.. word
the thing about suicide is that its final and unlike cutting it does'nt fade in time... but we are all entitled to feel how we like.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
...........I suggest you try it as it's the only way you'll find out.