the island's margins—
huge slices of limestone cake
dipped in salty juice
Very intelligent haiku. Now you have mastered this art....I always imagined it as a floating mint in a lime-soda glass...10+++++
Salty juice is dropped inside the sea water and this is dropped on the island. The margins of island are really amazing. A brilliant poem is well penned.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very well conceived haiku. The cake image of lime stone and salty water are so appropriate!