It Is Better... Poem by Farwa Penpoint

It Is Better...

Rating: 4.7


It's better not to wave your hand to some one and say 'Hi',
At the end if you want to say 'Goodbye',
It's better not to be anyone's friend,
if someday you mean to say 'here our relations end',
It's better not to ask someone for a warm hug,
If you mean to ditch like a bug,
It's better not to tell someone 'I love you',
if someday you aim to leave, saying 'for me there's nothing you could do',
It's better not to ignore but understand these things,
cause except pain and tears nothing it brings..

Thursday, May 5, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: advise
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 13 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Farwa. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Akhtar Jawad 26 June 2014

Nice thoughts, lovely poem.

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Robert Green 22 March 2012

Very well written good work :)

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Romeo Della Valle 08 May 2011

A very well crafted and poignant write! I like it very much! Great talent you got! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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