Farwa Penpoint

Rookie - 20 Points (August25'1998 / Paris (Europe))

It Is Better... - Poem by Farwa Penpoint

It's better not to wave your hand to some one and say 'Hi',
At the end if you want to say 'Goodbye',
It's better not to be anyone's friend,
if someday you mean to say 'here our relations end',
It's better not to ask someone for a warm hug,
If you mean to ditch like a bug,
It's better not to tell someone 'I love you',
if someday you aim to leave, saying 'for me there's nothing you could do',
It's better not to ignore but understand these things,
cause except pain and tears nothing it brings..

Topic(s) of this poem: advise

Comments about It Is Better... by Farwa Penpoint

  • Jazib Kamalvi (9/13/2017 1:35:00 PM)

    A great start with a nice poem, Farwa. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (6/26/2014 5:41:00 AM)

    Nice thoughts, lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Green (3/22/2012 4:45:00 AM)

    Very well written good work :) (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (5/8/2011 8:18:00 AM)

    A very well crafted and poignant write! I like it very much! Great talent you got! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2011 11:12:00 AM)

    I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, September 11, 2015

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