poet Sayeed Abubakar

Sayeed Abubakar

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It Is Raining So Rough

It is raining so rough.The leaves of trees
Are shedding tears. My heart has got soaked in
Pain. Where are you, my sweet bird? Where, in which
Forest, are you getting drenched alone? Come,
Come here; Let us bathe in pain together.

Topic(s) of this poem: rain

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2020
Poem Edited: Thursday, September 17, 2020

Form: Blank Verse


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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (9/16/2020 11:09:00 PM)

    My heart has got soaked in
    Pain. Where are you, my sweet bird? ..excellent

    cloudy sky is crying
    it's tears wetting
    the soft juvenile body of tree leaves
    sweetheart is waiting on the door sill
    oh! but the coming path of love has no end
    now the raining tears dancing over there in waiting heart......

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (9/16/2020 1:38:00 PM)

    Awesome poem, nicely written, to suffer pain alone is indeed very painful.

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  • Gordon Walter (9/16/2020 1:22:00 PM)

    A painful request nicely written 5 Stars

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