It's Only A Dream Chum Poem by nimal dunuhinga

It's Only A Dream Chum

Rating: 5.0


My whole wealth has been confiscated
And I woke up in the middle of the night with a huge cry.
Thank God! now I realized why you didn't allow me to deposit money in the bank?

*Once I had a nightmare that my ugly face was printed on a big currency note.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 29 September 2008

Nimal, normally I don't like explanations, but you manage to make the 'note below' a part of the poem. Again we are presented with a piece of imaginative writing: succinct and and wonderous. I laughed like a madman.

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Sandra Fowler 28 September 2008

Your political eyes are wide open. I agree with Alison. This is an astute comment on the current crisis. As always, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 27 September 2008

Your poem has few words, but a rich vein of Irony running through it. Thank God for a sense of humor, eh? A brilliant comment on the USA's financial mess. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Tai Chi Italy 27 September 2008

As my bank manager told me, many years ago...'bricks and mortar are your only safe investments' Stuff the bank and all who go down with them....they have sailed on impunity for far too long. Grinning at you, Tai

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