Izzat... (Respect) Poem by Randhir kaur

Izzat... (Respect)

Rating: 5.0

Itni izzat hai humre dil mai aapke liye
Kam pardh jate hai shaabdh
Aur Jo izzat shaabdho mai bayaan ho jaye
Wo izzat ki koi izzat nahi...
Baate to sirf dikhawa hai
Fitarat toh ghar pe choar ke aate hai
Humhri toh aap mai basi hui hai
Aapko khush dekhna humri aadat ban jaye....
Aap chahe toh humhe aazma ke dekh lijiye,
Meri sari umar apko lag jaye.
Zinda reh kar toh koi gawa nai dai paye,
Shayad jaane ke baad aapko wo izzat yaad aye....

Izzat... (Respect)
Friday, October 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: respect
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first attempt in writing Hindi poetry. Apology for the error/errors if any.

This goes to all my near and dear ones, who are a part of my life.. I can't give u any proof but maybe my pen could give u a bit of gratification that anybody can place me but not my respect.
No words can touch your feet, this much is my respect for you all because you all define my life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 23 October 2016

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your lovely words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2016

Izzat or respect is the best virtue that has been nicely interpreted in this poem. Marvellous one. Many thanks dear Randhir, keep the ball rolling.

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Randhir Kaur 08 October 2016

Hey, dear senior sister thank you so much for the kind review. Wishes received happily with a wide smile on my face. Love you too..Respect.

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Sheela Sharma 08 October 2016

Commendable, junior! Keep growing with such pieces.. This is what makes me love you more! :) wishes, wishes and loads of wishes!

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2017

Hi Randhir, An Exquisite Statement on Relationships. Very nice poem. When I read, Aapko khush dekhna humri aadat ban jaye...., do I find the Vedic hymn, Loka Samasta Sukhino Bhavantu.... And then, Aap chahe toh humhe aazma ke dekh lijiye, , is another selfless surrender. And finally, Meri sari umar apko lag jaye., the ultimate sacrifice in the altar of love, so that... Zinda reh kar toh koi gawa nai dai paye, Shayad jaane ke baad aapko wo izzat yaad aye.... Very well done. You have complete hold on your words. The words dance to your tunes in the poem.. Encore! ! ! 100++

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Randhir Kaur 18 January 2017

Thank you so very much Sir. I am with no words. Just blessed. Greetings from India dear poet.

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Siddartha Montik 28 December 2016

No errors go in Emotions, whatever may be the Language! ! Loved it! !

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Siddartha Montik 16 December 2016

I tried my best to understand the Language Poet.. but it is still about the respect I dear it all in my sense to all your near and dear ones! ! always a time to thank and show gratitude for those and showing in such respect! ! thank you for these humble lines as you shared! ! ! 10++++! ! !

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Randhir Kaur 10 November 2016

Hey...that's so nice to see your feedback on my Hindi verse Edward. Glad..!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2016

Give it out and, get it back! ! Respect. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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