Jealous Admiration Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Jealous Admiration



People clamor for truth and honesty,
Love and committment...
Loyality and devotion!
And when it is served,
With a realization their participation is required...
They turn their backs,
Claiming it is too tough to chew!
Each time a choice selection is tasted...
They become upset with the presentation,
Returning what has been ordered
To their specifications...
Time and time again!
They do not comprehend...
The more difficult they are with their desires,
Wishing to be pleased.
The less anyone is willing to care,
Whether that is done or not!
Eventually they are just left alone,
To complain about what is not right with the world,
And the lives of others they secretly despise
With jealous admiration!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 04 November 2006

Jealous admiration aside, I'd say excellent write, Lawrence! Well done! ! Brian

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