Journey To Betterment Poem by Piew Dutta

Journey To Betterment

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Landscape of the Monsoon dawn
Through the windowpane
Looks so calm and pensive
And probably a bit panic stricken.


As if a callow oil painting
Is waiting for the next quirk
Being under the creative spell
The Almighty must destroy again his work.

Landscape of the Monsoon dawn
Burn out all your sorrow
You know you will find yourself anew
At dawn of a tomorrow.


As life beat me even sometimes
So much unreasonably
I also became as morose as you
I wished to get lost forever truly.


Then one day Nature awoke
And told me life is a mystery.
If I could rescue the secret key
I would gain the complete me.


Landscape of the Monsoon dawn
Like the cloud let your soul billow
Let me wish you one day
A really good morrow.

Sunday, June 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 26 June 2016

The landscape you have painted of a monsoon dawn is amazing. Its shows your talent and flair of writing great poems. Keep inking.

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Chandra Basnet 20 July 2016

Piew Dutta! Wonderful poem....!

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Sumit Ganguly 28 June 2016

Nature controls our mood. We are in search of a 'secret key' to become master of self. Nice poem 10.

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Tirtho Banerjee 28 June 2016

Excellent write, Piew...continue writing with such insight and depth. I like it...Just one small suggestion though, bring more coherence into your work...thanks

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Shobana Gomes 28 June 2016

I thought this very provoking like someone hidden within the depths of her own. Thank you for reading my poem and commenting - shobana

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Kishore Kumar Das 27 June 2016

Dawn starts with monsoon rain....feelings overwhelm the poetess......she starts her game with pen and paper.....the magic.......a hypnotic poem by you.....

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