Landscape of the Monsoon dawn
Through the windowpane
Looks so calm and pensive
And probably a bit panic stricken.
As if a callow oil painting
Is waiting for the next quirk
Being under the creative spell
The Almighty must destroy again his work.
Landscape of the Monsoon dawn
Burn out all your sorrow
You know you will find yourself anew
At dawn of a tomorrow.
As life beat me even sometimes
So much unreasonably
I also became as morose as you
I wished to get lost forever truly.
Then one day Nature awoke
And told me life is a mystery.
If I could rescue the secret key
I would gain the complete me.
Landscape of the Monsoon dawn
Like the cloud let your soul billow
Let me wish you one day
A really good morrow.
Nature controls our mood. We are in search of a 'secret key' to become master of self. Nice poem 10.
Excellent write, Piew...continue writing with such insight and depth. I like it...Just one small suggestion though, bring more coherence into your work...thanks
I thought this very provoking like someone hidden within the depths of her own. Thank you for reading my poem and commenting - shobana
Dawn starts with monsoon rain....feelings overwhelm the poetess......she starts her game with pen and paper.....the magic.......a hypnotic poem by you.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The landscape you have painted of a monsoon dawn is amazing. Its shows your talent and flair of writing great poems. Keep inking.