The Unconquerable Love Poem by Piew Dutta

The Unconquerable Love

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You sailed to the deepest core of my soul
You opened every closed door of my mind
With an angel's pride.
Like a morning singing bird
You awakened my somnolent heart
By Cupid's dream, so bright!

How can I contrive to hide myself
Behind an eerie veil?
As isolated as the nymph
Of the blue mountain
Dwell throughout the spring
Beneath a wintry spell.

My love!
You found the path
Towards the obscure valley of my heart
So easily!
Every dumb cell of my body
Achieved a language of love.

Whenever I endeavour to solve
The mystery of your eyes,
I can feel you breathe and rise
Within my soul.
I felt your love all of a sudden
In a dreamy obsession.

What more to say?
As if I have been nurturing you
Within myself.
As if we are getting closer day by day
In the realm of an imaginative mind
Along with the fear of your going away.

My man! Why did you pick up the blossom?
If you were not ready to love her a rissom.
I cannot even live
If you will not be mine.
As the blue of the sky has to die
Except sunshine.

How many sleepless nights I have spent alone
Dreaming about my beloved,
The dark nights told the glistening stars
The trees came to know
As the wind so much whispers
Clouds told the playing angels
But the lord remained silent.

Like the most common folk tale
If we could have stayed so well
As does a solitary quail.
I am still sitting on your vessel
Until the earth comes to an end
I might wait wait and wait again.

Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 17 December 2016

in every word and line loved this Love expression. even surpassing everything of my Still a Beauty (sorry) ! ! Thank you for sharing Poet. Am sure you will grow much in this love and will be a great Poet! ! Amen.10++++! !

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Dutendra Chamling 20 July 2016

...My love! You found the path Towards the obscure valley of my heart So easily! Every dumb cell of my body Achieved a language of love.... Piew Dutta! Wow! Marvellous! I liked that way you wrote this poem, you have your own language for poetry, it's great. Thumbs up!

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Tirtho Banerjee 28 June 2016

Whenever I endeavour to solve The mystery of your eyes, I can feel you breathe and rise Within my soul. I felt your love all of a sudden In a dreamy obsession Simply lovely...Amazing piece of poetry...Keep writing and sharing

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Kishore Kumar Das 27 June 2016

Love pours out from the north-west corner of your heart.......no dearth of adjectives for your obsessions......the Cupid's dream will be true one day....the nymph's thirst will be satiated.....wonderful lines by you...

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 October 2015

'Until the earth.......wait again' is very nice.Very nice.

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