monica monet

Joy Of Love (Love Poem)

A moment’s peace from journeys long
A fullness ripe complete

Bewilderment as joy unfolds
How my heart does beat

Awakening from deepest sleep
A morning pure I greet

And everything I see is good
As I walk down the street

The sun is stroking yonder trees
And flowers rise to greet

A dawn like every other morn
For me it is replete

With tingling laughter welling up
Unbidden flowing sweet

A heart once lost is free at last
As I my love may meet

Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 7, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, July 22, 2011

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Comments about Joy Of Love (Love Poem) by monica monet

  • John KnightJohn Knight (3/26/2010 7:01:00 PM)

    Hi Monica - nice love poem - I like the structure with each last line preserving the rhyme. It gives real flow and rhythm. The words you use in the first line are lovely - Peace - joy - Awake - Good - Sun - Dawn - Tingling laughter - Free heart. The second lines amplify these feelings 'A heart once lost is free at last - As I my love may meet'. This is a mega love poem.- thanks for sharing. Lov in poetry - JOHN.

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  • Dr. Ratan BhattacharjeeDr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/24/2010 2:46:00 AM)

    a modern poet with great sense of rhyming

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  • george george (12/2/2009 5:21:00 AM)

    Nice expression of the hope that comes with new love! This line especially got me:

    The sun
    is stroking yonder trees
    And flowers
    rise to greet

    Very very good!

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  • Merna Ibrahim (11/27/2009 7:03:00 AM)

    Lovely and romantic poem. good job!
    I hope you visit my poetry section...Merna

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  • Asim Bandyopadhyay (11/27/2009 6:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful. I love to read this poem.

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  • Dev Poet (11/23/2009 9:09:00 PM)

    Cute. I like your way of words

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  • Heather Starfire (11/7/2009 3:25:00 PM)

    very nice. The computer won't let me say just very nice though, so I also like that the rhymes are unstrained and fairly original.

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