Joy Ride Poem by Vijay Sai R

Joy Ride



Centuries before
Twin legs
Synchronously walking
So much toil
Moving here and there
Reaching destination
Wherever I want
But so much time
And tiredness too
Then came a boon
A gift no one expected
And a great invention too
Bicycle invented
So much relief
To human community
No more toil
Destination reached
And distance covered
With so much ease
Windy air
As gentle as ever
Good for health
Feel so fresh
No more fuss
No more pain
Eco friendly too
Joy attained
Not to say
Boundaries unlimited

Friday, June 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: liberty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anish Debnath 16 September 2015

good way to describe need & the result of that very useful invention Vijay sir.nice one.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 15 September 2015

The environment and climate change that resulted by the involvement of human behavior a specific subject to all and this is a wonderful poem.

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Allotey Abossey 20 June 2015

Technology has helped in many ways.... It has also helped in the cancellation of 5 basic education final papers in my country just this week. I love the flow of the poem.. Good organization. God bless you

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Scince has aken leap forward men has moved onward many boundries have been opened distance too has been reduced

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Kewayne Wadley 19 June 2015

Nicely written! Eco-friendly. A great poem about the environment as well as the invention of the bicycle I also like the pace you kept of the story as it progressed

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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