Happy New Year Poem by Vijay Sai R

Happy New Year

Rating: 3.5

Second by second minute ends
Minute by minute hour ends
Hour by hour day ends
Day by day week ends
Week by week month ends
Month by month year ends
Though every year ends
Second by second minute begins
Minute by minute hour begins
Hour by hour day begins
Day by day week begins
Week by week month begins
Month by month year begins
Prompting us to perceive
Every end has a new beginning!

Kevin Patrick 31 December 2012

It was like you had made the geography of time into a matryoshka doll, with every moment becoming a precedents for the next, showing that infinity can be stretched to a simple moment and fabricated as a false perception of our existence. Time is Now and only Now all other points are ephemeral. A fascinating read with a deep philosophical undercurrent. Could cause a head ache but definitly worth it

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Fred Babbin 31 December 2009

Very nice thought. You put it well,

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Carol Gall 31 December 2009

nice poem happy new year 10

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I like how you showed the concept of the begginging in every end. I think it goes deeper than most people think.

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Meggie Gultiano 31 December 2009

A nice write..Happy new Year, too

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Kishor 02 January 2019

Timely poem

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S Karuppaiah. Kcas 01 January 2019

Superb Sai. Yes every end has a new beginning.congrats

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Jeanette Telusma 03 January 2018

Beautifully written..... I enjoyed reading it.

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Dr. Ramesh Mukhopadhyaya 04 January 2013

It reads like a concrete poem It is brilliant.. It is cool. But it charges the reader with an optimistic view of life. Happy New Year Dear Poet

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Drew Williams 01 January 2013

I love it! That was great!

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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