July Thirteenth Poem by Rekha Mandagere

July Thirteenth

Rating: 5.0


The pretty little mountain of Malaysia
And it is a part of my Asia
More worthier than all the gems of Persia
Who always shines among intelligentsia
It desires to live in the hearts of all
And has unique love even for small
That always stands high of tall
Finds for the best in the universal
The soul of all-Unwritten soul
Who makes impressions on every soul
The day has come to greet you Lil
Happy Birthday dear happy birthday
This must be a memorable day!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to my Pink child of Malaysia
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nurain Ali-balogun 12 July 2012

Nice lines, could use a little 'grammer editing' though but nice words.

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Happy birthday my nephew there in India; when is my sister's son getting married so make your uncle proud? Your brother is waiting for news my twin sister Rekha; our family wants to celebrate soon.

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Unwritten Soul 12 July 2012

Happy birthday to your child! ...This is fantastic, i loved it and i think everybody will love it Asia and Persia hahaha that sound so far but you make it sounds so short....as the India in the middle of the distance...closer. Send a regard to your children and everyone there..may July thirteenth will be a firework for everybody!

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