Wednesday, May 24, 2023

Just As Comments

Rating: 5.0

There should be a poem
that moves in and out, just as
the air your lungs capture and use,
deplete and toss away.
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Smoky Hoss
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Bri Edwards 25 May 2023

'every pain is drown, every hurt washed away.' 'drowned' ;) Do YOU have such a poem, hmm? bri ;)

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Richard Wlodarski 25 May 2023

Smoky, if you would incorporate this moving poem into a song...it will be a huge success. Enjoyed it immensely!

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Sandra Feldman 24 May 2023

This poem is immense and piercing into the most sensitive thoughts and feelings of the human heart. Extremely touching and like nothing else. I have ever read. Thank you!

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