Just Complete And Surrender Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Just Complete And Surrender

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Amazing this moment is splendour,
Before father soon all you surrender.
Tender is called for perfect devotion,
Come on, come on and feel emotion.

Motion of time nobody knows again,
Like winter and summer all say then,
Men feel they come and go away sure,
Perfect morning comes we feel it pure.

Assure this and tell which comes new,
Fresh air, fresh mind in morning dew.
Few of us feel, few also wander, think,
Wonderful change comes soon to link.

He is merciful father of heaven tells us,
We have to bear fruit in life minus plus.
That is why he gives advice to be aware,
It is not good to be in the dark unaware.

Just complete the thought in his wisdom,
We have inherited this father's kingdom.
System of resources we have to take care,
Oh awake brothers, freshness you share.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,17 May 2015. All rights reserved.

Sunday, November 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Isabel Pimentel 23 January 2020

We should surrender before God so that he can forgive us. God is always merciful to us. This work is splendid work.

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Always we should surrender before God. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Kishore Kumar Das 24 November 2016

Life is a process of role playing.....this simple aspect has been nicely presented in your poem......do your duty and surrender before the Almighty.....He takes care of everybody..10 marks for your lovely poem..

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2016

He is merciful father of heaven! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2016

picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x...a beautiful write...and yes I agree, we should take better care of resources ★ 17 May 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLovely poem heavenly written darling tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings 17 May 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Kriskaia DeWitt xThis is a beautiful write the imagery and wisdom is all there...We are our resources last defense... Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. 17 May 2015 by Kriskaia DeWitt | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xInspiring poem of faith and responsibility. 23 May 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xInspirational thoughts and words. I admire your great appraisal moments in this poem. We have to follow and obey His advices as memorized in the Holy Scripture. Awareness is the basic in all we do. Thank you for sharing this fascinating divine poetry.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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