Misty veil of night is unveiled,
Just before the arrival of dawn,
Little golden stars are seen smiling,
Behind the trees hope is awakened.
Covered with aura feathers each soul,
Flying in angelic fine body in sky,
Soul has sprinkled golden fragrance,
As we feel in trance flower is giggling.
Just before the dawn they have rippled,
Making the flow of Golden River in joy
Heart of night sky is singing in golden beats,
Fathomless bliss is felt with zeal of light.
Some say this is a dream of sweetness,
Some say souls are in deep meditation,
They are practicing to experience trance,
Some say they are already linked to God.
Each soul is experiencing out of body state,
Feeling lightness and glowing light around,
Misty dawn is very mystical to identify,
But souls are happy before dawn's arrival.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 April 2018. All rights reserved.
Excellent writing. This poem has so much depth Kumarmani10+ Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
This is a magnificent and mystical poem! ! ! I was instantly drawn into your beautiful dawn world of souls experiencing fathomless bliss. I think this is absolutely the best poem you've written- - you drew me into this spiritual state and I don't want to leave so into my fav list it goes so I can reread it over and over again. 10++++++++++++++++++
The beauty of the morn is picturesquely expressed linking it with spiritual reawakening! Beautiful write!
When i read this, i feel how calm it is if this poem is going to be recited and to be heard with eyes closed, i see shadow of blue with scattered dim lights, but when i see your picture, it has different colour but with similar imagery, this poetry is a peaceful, calm work of art!
Kumarmani ji, this is a poem not only with beautiful imagery but is most mystical as well. Anything mystical, makes my heart sing with joy. Misty veil of the night is most fascinatingly unveiled with the awakened souls experiencing a glow of light. Marvellous poem.........10++++
Spellbinding spiritual and nature write. Mixing nature and spiritual write at its best. It expresses in beautiful detail the wonders and beauty of dawn, that part of the day when we experienced fathomless bliss... A great piece.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautifully crafted poem Sir Kumar that captures the beauty of dawn.10