Lyn Paul

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Just Live - Poem by Lyn Paul

Help is on its way
Where that help
May be coming from is unknown
But accept
It is time to accept it

Seeing trees of green
Is always enough
To keep you
Alive

Hearing the dawns birds singing
Is the start of a magical moment
Giving hope
To a day of natural highs
Strong enough to destroy the lows

Cherish what never seemed wrong
Forget what....
Will never be right
Live
Remind yourself
You are alive

Breathe because you can
Smile
You know You need too
Want
To keep achieving

When
All stands still
And all seems ruined
Hope
Will get you through it

So many before you
Have....
Many more after you
Will face challenges
At extreme levels

The will to live
To strive for life
Is all that is needed


Remind Yourself...
To just, remind yourself
Its only life
So just live it!




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10th November 2015
Lyn Paul

Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance, believe, hope, live, strength


Comments about Just Live by Lyn Paul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/20/2016 1:15:00 AM)


    To be alive and, to live in peace. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (11/19/2015 10:56:00 AM)


    The will to live
    To strive for life
    Is all that is needed ..... a lovely message is given in this wise poem to move ahead with courage
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  • Paul Brookes (11/18/2015 1:14:00 AM)


    A great poem reminding us just live enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/13/2015 12:34:00 AM)


    Remind Yourself...
    To just, remind yourself
    Its only life
    So just live it! - - - - - true dictum.Remind oneself is life. Beautiful Poem. Thanks for sharing....10
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  • Valsa George (11/11/2015 10:54:00 PM)


    The will to live
    To strive for life
    Is all that is needed............ uplifting thoughts as ever Lyn! This poem brings a current of positive energy in!
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  • (11/11/2015 2:38:00 PM)


    We sometimes forget how important the simple things in life are to us. We should never give up hope, where would we be without it. I enjoyed reading this philosophical piece Lyn, the window to your heart. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/10/2015 11:42:00 AM)


    A moving poem, Lyn. Many now, before and after will encounter the same, so live and make the most of it.
    Thanks for the lift
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  • (11/10/2015 9:11:00 AM)


    A truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive... LOVE that line! (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2015 9:10:00 AM)


    truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive.... a stunning line. (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2015 9:09:00 AM)


    truly awesome write my friend. Remind yourself you are alive.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 10, 2015


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