Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Thursday, August 26, 2021

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Rating: 5.0

I shot an arrow in the air;
I never should have turned it loose.
It could have landed anywhere,
but it came down with a fat goose!
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Kim Barney
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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 September 2022

Just wonderful...5 stars dear poet

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2021

I have more fun with this fascinating poem of you, dear Kim,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2021

A wonderful other half of the famous Song, this has become the other fanmous Song of a great Poet! 5 Stars full.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2021

A fascinating and entertaining poem so spontaneously woven. Great imagination and nice rhyme, Kim. A clever take from the poem, The Arrow and the Song.

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Douglas Scotney 26 August 2021

now, as loose is lax and goose is gax, if you hadn't have turned it lax you'd still have a living gax.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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