I shot an arrow in the air;
I never should have turned it loose.
It could have landed anywhere,
but it came down with a fat goose!
I have more fun with this fascinating poem of you, dear Kim,
A wonderful other half of the famous Song, this has become the other fanmous Song of a great Poet! 5 Stars full.
A fascinating and entertaining poem so spontaneously woven. Great imagination and nice rhyme, Kim. A clever take from the poem, The Arrow and the Song.
now, as loose is lax and goose is gax, if you hadn't have turned it lax you'd still have a living gax.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Just wonderful...5 stars dear poet