Just Lucky Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Just Lucky

Rating: 5.0


I shot an arrow in the air;
I never should have turned it loose.
It could have landed anywhere,
but it came down with a fat goose!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Having fun with today's poem of the day by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, ‘The Arrow and the Song'. Written 26 August 2021
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 September 2022

Just wonderful...5 stars dear poet

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2021

I have more fun with this fascinating poem of you, dear Kim,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2021

A wonderful other half of the famous Song, this has become the other fanmous Song of a great Poet! 5 Stars full.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2021

A fascinating and entertaining poem so spontaneously woven. Great imagination and nice rhyme, Kim. A clever take from the poem, The Arrow and the Song.

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Douglas Scotney 26 August 2021

now, as loose is lax and goose is gax, if you hadn't have turned it lax you'd still have a living gax.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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