Just Sharing My Words On A Lovely Poem Well Taken In 2010 Poem by me poet yeps poet

Just Sharing My Words On A Lovely Poem Well Taken In 2010

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''As a butterfly flies
and glow worm glows
the candle
its life blows
so too
I shall be extinguished upon veils of time
let me share what is mine
and what is thine
to create a veritable gold mine
for mankind''

COMMENT

This is poetry in motion.

I just wish more here would visit your domain
then they would realize the beauty
of what you write
your PR and friend
USA

Saturday, June 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
AT TIMES WE WONDER
DID WE COMPOSE THESE LINES
AND
feel happy we did
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 29 June 2019

Yes, looking back at our poetry we often wonder who wrote that..

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 June 2019

Beautiful poem with sort of a philosophical touch. Liked it very much.10++++

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Anjandev Roy 30 June 2019

let me share what is mine and what is thine, you will definitely shine forever.......... Fine. anjandev roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 June 2019

GOING TO THE LORDS HOUSE FOR PRAYERS SHALL MEET ALL ERE ALL 4 BELOW HERE

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Srijita Mondal 30 June 2019

As a butterfly flies and glow worm glows the candle its life blows so too I shall be extinguished upon veils of time let me share what is mine and what is thine to create a veritable gold mine for mankind'' Veryyyyy Beautiful poem 100++

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 June 2019

O poet you the poet self cause light can lit up the sun can lit up the moon can lit up the stars can fire up the meteor can fire up the thunder with electricity can lit up the dragon fly can lit up dragon breath o you the poet the self cause light the best guide the best bright you the poet the self cause wisdom the poetic word's passion the great learning lesson the everlasting creation here I come for your excellence I visit for your poetic expression

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2019

Emotion! ! Locomotion! Poetry in motion! ! ! ! ! ! Yesterday is gone too soon with the wind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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