I know that life had taken a lot from u in a hurry
I know that your eyes became red from crying
I know that your mind was about 2 explode from your worry
I know that u'll never return like before, flying.
But look at yourself now, you're continuing your life
No matter how old are you, u don't have 2 forget the past
Because it is a part of u, but don't in sadness dive
Draw a new picture 2 u, colour your days very fast.
How about making a truce with life, no more pain
For sadness had been vanished years ago
Promise u'll never leave your tears falling from your eyes like the rain
&be sure that after any cloud or lightning u'll see the rainbow.
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I don't want 2 make u sad but life is full of shocks, what is the thing which happened 2 u&changed u completely? send your answer after your comment.thanks for sharing.
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its a good poem... and impressive one, seems to me done in poetic flow.. melodious one.. idea is rich and the expression is also good.. well done.. just continue writing... I like the way you write.. impressive, sweet and wonderful one 10+++++
so true...time waits for no man... shifty about the txt spelling...but I guess that's actually part of the charm. this poem would be my favourite out of yours, I think.
I know that life had taken a lot from u in a hurry I know that your eyes became red from crying I......... but donot allow the tears to dropp on holy land. it will brinn shame.. lovely poem to be read and to reread.............10 rad mien cry not.... all dreamsnot come true
finely penned the sad fact! smile and move forward.... 10+
No matter how old are you, u don't have 2 forget the past Because it is a part of u, but don't in sadness dive-- > these verses touched my deep... I FOUND MYSELF: this is the thing which changed me completely... SMILE... and it blooms forever...
sure a rich poem and let me share my say about smiles...(a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq) a goo poem.10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are right Zeinab, the life is full of lethal shocks but the most lethal shock is the death..it is so hard to face it..anyway, a great advices from a wise person...good work..Merna