Just When I Thought Poem by Serena Taylor

Just When I Thought

Rating: 4.5


Just when I thought that all my hope was gone
You took me by my hand
And told me I was wrong

Just when I thought there was no bright light
You took me to it.
I was amazed by the sight.

Just when I thought you were gone for good
You came back to me
And lifted my hood.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Post 21 February 2012

This poem really reminds me of the brink and being pulled back from it.

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Unwritten Soul 26 February 2012

It done in short but it really nice one Serena, i guess you have a good vision and great feeling when you writing this, it felt well to me as a reader..keep writing_Unwritten Soul

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Chidori Storm 03 April 2012

Nice poem. Not bad at all. Keep writin.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 01 April 2012

dear sister......it's great to see you carry on the legacy of the favorite Sara Teasdale or Emily Dickinson into writing, who left their pristine touch into the sentiments of imagery, solitude, and many more MOONLIGHT or HOPES that still feathers above all.....great to read and mind you have miles to go, before you sleep- if certainly the great, remarkable ROBERT FROST thesis is to be believed....

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Caleb G. Hall 19 March 2012

Wonderful flow and story. Great work.

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Liliana Roman 12 March 2012

awwwwww! i loved it! it made me think about finding my prince charming one day! (sorry, had a girl moment there)

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Crimson Soul 02 March 2012

Short But Sweet :) Its Nice

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