Keep Living 3 Poem by Jahan Zeb

Keep Living 3

Rating: 5.0


Came out the two later, deep at night
Breeze blew, stars shone, moon so bright
Wrapped in one blanket were two souls
No music, no dance, no jobs, no dolls
The music they heard was sea wave sound
The light they had was moonlight around
The company of two had ecstasy high
Leaving the unknown isle, they'd never try
One early morning the lad left for food
Cruel luck thus then resolved to seclude
The princes of island waited till dark
But could not see her king's eyes' spark
Returned to hut, heart heavy, eyes wet
Still no news what fate he had met

Jahan Zaib 27/12/2012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 10 January 2013

This is a great idea! A series of poems to keep us hooked! X x

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Hazel Durham 30 December 2012

I'm really enjoying this wonderful story, great write!

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2012

This third edition sound mature and a new way from the past episode of Keep Living poem...very nice poem but i really amazed how the story was evolved into new perspective from 1,2 to 3.. A teacher knows what to teach..surely know how to make a thing become interesting to listen_Soul

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Payal Parande 27 December 2012

hmm...whenever i read a book or see a movie i always hate tragic part i always desire to just skip it but everything have some good things and bad things......as always bravo write sir though i do hope the ending is happy i don't like sad endings...........

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