Adryan Barnathan

Keeping Things Whole - Poem by Adryan Barnathan

In a field
I am the absence
of field.
This is
always the case.
Wherever I am
I am what is missing.

When I walk
I part the air
and always
the air moves in
to fill the spaces
where my body's been.

We all have reasons
for moving.
I move
to keep things whole.

Comments about Keeping Things Whole by Adryan Barnathan

  • (6/30/2010 4:59:00 AM)

    Great poem. A poem by Mark Strand, whom you didn't gave credit. What's hard about giving credit? (Report) Reply

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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/14/2009 8:45:00 PM)

    A motion that is magnetic and a poem that is profound. Well written. (Report) Reply

  • (10/4/2006 6:02:00 AM)

    this is the best reason i have ever read to keep moving and i heart this poem.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 11, 2004

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 14, 2010

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