Thursday, February 9, 2017

Kerala Comments

Rating: 5.0

Log batate isko utsav rooh ka
Kerala jahan tumhein jana zaroor hain
Shayad ek din main bhi jaaun is yatra pe
Aur is sundarta ko khojun mere dil se
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Liza Sudina 16 August 2019

A very inspiring poem and translation! शायद एक दिन मैं भी जाऊं इस यात्रा पे और इस सुन्दरता को खोजूं मेरे दिल से

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 August 2019

Thank you Liza for your appreciation of this lovely poem. I understand from your statement that you have read the original by Hannah, which I have given below. I am thrilled that you have posted a part of the poem in Devanagari. Obliged

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Liza Sudina 16 August 2019

A very inspiring poem and translation! शायद एक दिन मैं भी जाऊं इस यात्रा पे और इस सुन्दरता को खोजूं मेरे दिल से

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 01 April 2017

It is always a pleasure to see group effort. Poem by Sister Frances, translation by your favourite poetess Kavita Singh and the finishing strokes given by you. Reading the poem Kerala made me nostalgic of my native land. The beauty of Kerala mesmerises you! Great work and coordination. Thank you Unni!

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 April 2017

Thank you Geeta, for the encouraging words. Sure, the poem by Frances is of very high standard, as you can see-I have posted it below. And Kavita has done the translation. All the good words are due to them I shall convey your appreciation to Kavita.

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 March 2017

Hello My Dear Fellow Poets, As you are no longer able to read the original poem by Frances on ph, I post it here. I believe, I have her permission to do so. Kerala - Poem by Sister Frances They call it a treat for your soul Kerala is the place you should go Perhaps one day I'll come visit And discover the beauty you know Meditate in tea gardens on rolling slopes A serene land with rows of greenery Or go cruise on the water in a ferry While the sun sets that sounds merry Sit on a house boat gazing on backwaters Watching banks of palm trees go by Wander through jungle pathways It's a heavenly tropical paradise The beaches look pretty awesome I think I need to go visit soon With such stunning natural beauty I am thinking a second honeymoon ****

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Susan Williams 01 March 2017

Hi, my friend. You asked if I have read this but although I found the words Log, din, is, mere, me, and hum to be English words I could not read the rest because my dear friend I cannot speak or read Hindi which looks like a lovely language. Thank you, though, for thinking of my delight had I been able to read it..

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 March 2017

Hi Susan, Thank you. The only solution is to learn Hindi! Hehehe! ! ! Love And Regards -unnikrishnan

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Tom Billsborough 17 February 2017

I have no Hindi but I'd love to hear it spoken. I might be able to copy your translation onto Google Translate as thet have a sound facility. In any event I'll read Sister Frances's poem. Kerala is I believe a very beautiful region of India. My Great aunt spoke fluent Hindi as she spent many years there. Her husband was an Engineer over in your country.

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 February 2017

Hi Tom, Thank you for reading this poem of Frances. And your Indian connection, I am delighted to read of. Great. I hope that gives you ample reason to make visit to India/Kerala.. Let us hope we meet outside ph! ! ! !

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Bharati Nayak 13 February 2017

An extremely beautiful poem.I have read Sister Frances' original work in English.Yes congrats to all three poets Sister Frances, Kavita Singh and Unnikrishnan E.S. for this wonderful poem.The Hindi rendering is so nice that one can not distinguish it from an original creative work.A sure 10 +++

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 February 2017

Hi Bharati, So nice of you to read this translation of the exquisite poem by Frances. Her poem is so beautifully rendered, that I was emancipated, thrilled. On my request, Kavita did a beautiful translation in Hindi. I just helped her out a little here or there. A finishing touch or something like that. It is a matter of contention, whether I have been successful in the translation, in capturing the beauty of Frances' poem; I do not consider my rendering half that good. But Bharati, your words make my day. I know I have to improve a lot. That I will do, with your help and blessings. Thank you.

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Sister Frances 13 February 2017

Thank you Bharati for your kind words and yes I am very thankful to have a wonderful friend who can translate my poems, it is indeed a great gift :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 March 2017

Hi Bharati, Thank you; on behalf of Kavita and Frances as well! ! !

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Sister Frances 12 February 2017

Thank you my friend and many thanks to Ms Singh, I am always thrilled when more get to read sweet poetry :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 February 2017

Hi Frances, It is my pleasure, Frances. Sure, I will convey your words to Kavita.

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Rebecca Navarre 10 February 2017

Oh, This Is Such A Wonderfully Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! For Translating This, For All To See! ! ! ! ! How Beautiful, Mystic, And Inspiring! ! ! ! ! Gods Country, Can So Truly, & Always, Be! ! ! ! ! ! So Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++++++++++ Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 February 2017

Thank you Rebecca

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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