Killer Poem by Rini Shibu
Killer
He took her to the pool
And asked her to jump
He knew she can't swim
But pushed her to the depth
Her hopes were sinking
And he saw her drowning
She called for help
But noone turned
He promised to hold
Knowing she is phobic
but he left her alone and vanished
Will he able to live peacefully
His hands are red don't you see
It's a terrific poem! A little variation from Rini's other poems but a typical one quite insightful...thanks for sharing....10
The tale of a cold-blooded murder told well. Sadly some make like to make others suffer.
I was very much surprised by the ending of this poem. He was very cold-blooded to let her drown.
Thanks Lamar.. Some pretend to be good, will know the true color on time.
And he saw her drowning She called forhelp But noone turned...........................yes his hands are read............. from your usual romantic tunes you turned today to death...... it was strange for me.. to read it........ death, helplessness... purposeful........ cheating. killing. why? picturing life and love and its problems........ tony
Haha.. Just for a change, isn't it boring everyday same topic.. thanks Tony.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/23/2024 5:24:18 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I liked this write. It has all the elements of an archetypal condensed story in poem form.++10