Last Breath Poem by Rini Shibu

Last Breath

Rating: 5.0


If there is no air to breathe
And there is no food to eat
Will you survive on this earth to live
Why you are existing here
And from where you came
Are we created to love each other
Then can you tell what is love
Is it the feeling I get
The ache in my heart when you cry
Or the joy when you smile
Then why do we all fight
This earth will be a beautiful place
Like heaven on earth
If we live for one another
Just a little time is left to fullfill
this dream before you take last breath

Sunday, January 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,heaven,life and death,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Crow 21 January 2018

Were we born to love? Good one Rini

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Rini Shibu 21 January 2018

What you say? ? Thanks John

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This was Judith Blatherwick. She writes under a different name everyday.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 December 2022

Rini where you are now? If you can log in for a while, you can find many of your fans who have motivated you to come back and write. This is a very nice poem. Top score!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 December 2022

Yes, I worry about that also Bravo! ! ! !

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Robert Murray Smith 18 June 2018

If there is no air to breathe it is finito instantaneously. Good write on love.++10

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2018

Why do we all fight? ! Oh mankind! Hatred and war will NEVER bring us peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 30 January 2018

Peace and love all seek.. Thanks

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Tom Allport 29 January 2018

a poem of many questions that most loving people think? ...................thoughtfully written Rini

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Rini Shibu 29 January 2018

Thanks Tom! !

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