Killer Dream~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Killer Dream~

Rating: 5.0


I rise from the ashes of my dream,
All in black and burnt with emote bream,
The wind is breathing high in spirit,
And the waves are dashing dead,
Yes, I rise from the ashes of my dream
And feeling low in essence.
What did I see - Why all so scary?
The false epic deceived me in sleep.

The sun is rising with colourful rays,
Birds chattering and the nightingale sings a melody,
Butterfly kisses the flowers,
Bell rings, water gushes and life begin,
And the ashes of my dream settle down.
As I witness a new beginning,
The reality defeats the dream.

A new song on my lips!
From the green stems the brown leaves fall,
The dawn begins to draw a new art,
My cheek is cold and bright, finally!
My heart beats the drums very fast,
O, scary night never returns with those dreams again.

Saturday, April 10, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: nightmares,dreams,scare,life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak S S 15 April 2021

Inspiring...A new song on my lips!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 April 2021

Good one. As long as you live nightmares will come to you. You don't have to go to them

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 April 2021

My heart beats the drums very fast, O, scary night never returns with those dreams again.Very excellwntly worded, indeed, A Killer Dream! 5 Stars Full!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 April 2021

Very powerful! I love the first line. Bravo!

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Captain Cur 10 April 2021

A stunning write, I particularly liked the line, The reality defeats the dream.

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