Kiss Of Life Poem by me poet yeps poet

Kiss Of Life

Rating: 5.0


When you blunder
The world does thunder
When you light a flickering candle
lightening precedes it
and as you open your lips
clouds burst and it rains
drips your tight dress and unveils
what is hidden tightly within

So, kiss me I PRAY
else ask your God
to take my life away

Now of what use on this earth
is my stay
let me silently pass away
or
come and kiss me now
just now today
right away

Saturday, May 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss,love,miss you,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A THOUGHT OF TODAY
WHEN IN LONELINESS
AMONGST
LOVED
HUMAN
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chan Mongol 25 May 2019

A very well orchestrated poem with aromas and beauties of good spirits and with depth of thoughts. Thanks for sharing your masterpiece

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thank u so much I must read ur poem as else you won't again here come

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Kevin Patrick 25 May 2019

Love the opening lines, instantly grab me with force, the force of a great kiss can make a hurricane welt and his, the magnetism of two bodies can make nature run. Your a true original me poet.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 May 2019

come and kiss me now just now today right away

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 May 2019

kiss me I PRAY else ask your God to take my life away......................WELL

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

When you blunder The world does thunder When you light a flickering candle lightening precedes it and as you open your lips clouds burst and it rains drips your tight dress and unveils what is hidden tightly within... deeply poetic and beautiful allegory

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

come and kiss me now just now today right away.....sweet

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

So, kiss me I PRAY else ask your God to take my life away.... beautiful

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Anjandev Roy 26 May 2019

Magnificent write. Concluding stanza amazing. Thank u.anjandev roy..

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