When you blunder
The world does thunder
When you light a flickering candle
lightening precedes it
and as you open your lips
clouds burst and it rains
drips your tight dress and unveils
what is hidden tightly within
So, kiss me I PRAY
else ask your God
to take my life away
Now of what use on this earth
is my stay
let me silently pass away
or
come and kiss me now
just now today
right away
Love the opening lines, instantly grab me with force, the force of a great kiss can make a hurricane welt and his, the magnetism of two bodies can make nature run. Your a true original me poet.
kiss me I PRAY else ask your God to take my life away......................WELL
When you blunder The world does thunder When you light a flickering candle lightening precedes it and as you open your lips clouds burst and it rains drips your tight dress and unveils what is hidden tightly within... deeply poetic and beautiful allegory
So, kiss me I PRAY else ask your God to take my life away.... beautiful
Magnificent write. Concluding stanza amazing. Thank u.anjandev roy..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very well orchestrated poem with aromas and beauties of good spirits and with depth of thoughts. Thanks for sharing your masterpiece
thank u so much I must read ur poem as else you won't again here come