((22) I´ll Give You My Eyes Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente
((22) I´ll Give You My Eyes
One step forward,
Stand up, please.
Let me explain need and virtue,
the mystery gravitating around you.
Let me break the distance.
A new voice is a return to hope.
Let´s make doves fly,
and forget routine, survival.
A walk, some confidence,
knots untie,
breathe slowly.
I´ll give you my eyes,
and feel you close.
Words tremble, rush,
so many things to say.
How could you preserve yourself sweet
and keep listening with soft ears?
Talking about honey
we discovered sweet voices
need care
Just when i needed a very refreshing piece.This come on time..A powerful penning you have..i love this
«knots untie, breathe slowly».- care poetic with a rhythm … it is important and beautiful
This is a sweet honey coated poem.An eye opener for lovers.Good job Luis!
brilliant, the idea is lovely and your words are delicate thanks for sharing
Poem with profundity. I will give you my eyes, Then I shall see through your eyes, All distances will eliminate, Differences won't incriminate. CP
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 3:20:07 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Elegant language, this poem displays a real understanding of the way in which language works.