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((22) I´ll Give You My Eyes

Rating: 4.9
One step forward,
Stand up, please.
Let me explain need and virtue,
the mystery gravitating around you.
Let me break the distance.

A new voice is a return to hope.
Let´s make doves fly,
and forget routine, survival.
A walk, some confidence,
knots untie,
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COMMENTS
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009
This is a sweet honey coated poem.An eye opener for lovers.Good job Luis!
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Noha El3wdy 25 May 2009
brilliant, the idea is lovely and your words are delicate thanks for sharing
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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009
Excellent idea, love it.
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C. P. Sharma 20 December 2008
Poem with profundity. I will give you my eyes, Then I shall see through your eyes, All distances will eliminate, Differences won't incriminate. CP
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Will Barber 18 December 2008
A very moving poem, moving from irony to true love. - Will
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Aijaz Asif 06 November 2008
a lovely poem written on love, i liked it thanks 10 for this wonderful write rgds asif
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Anjali Sinha 26 September 2008
nice give eyes and feel oh so close- so romantic thanks for sharing regards anjalie (do read mine ARE U THERE)
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Little Hatila ;) 09 August 2008
wow it was very romantic...good job
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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 July 2008
Love is lively here....well done.
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Abdelmajid Seghir 19 April 2008
if that's a real story, all i can say is God help you! ! lol keep up the good poetry
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